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Post by ele650 on Apr 1, 2010 18:12:08 GMT -6
Rippler waited impatiently for the girl from the Aphrodite cabin to come. "Where are you, we have a race against the Ares cabin in a minute!" she scolded her, even though she wasn't there. She paced and paced and paced and paced and paced. She finally saw her friend approaching.
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Post by melissa2131 on Apr 1, 2010 18:17:48 GMT -6
"Whatsup" I called to her, "geez girl cant I ever brush my hair in peace?"
I looked at the broken chariots sitting around. "Aint it dangerous? I dont wanna get dirty"
She asked if i had brought Death Defier"well of course!!!!" i showed her my anklet and spun it once, twice than bopped it. Death Defier rose into its beautiful sword, i was ready.
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Post by ele650 on Apr 1, 2010 18:23:50 GMT -6
Rippler rolled her eyes and nodded, heres our chariot, she said, pointing to a pink and silver chariot, decorated with carvings bows and arrows and gazelle, along with roses and doves. Rippler swiveled on her heel "Like it? Or do you have to do some adjustments, I picked the bests signs from both of our moms (You still don't know I'm a child of Artemis). She looked at her pegasus Rush snorting and she hooked him on silently. She hopped on the chariot then looked at the girl "Ready?"
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Post by melissa2131 on Apr 1, 2010 18:30:22 GMT -6
"um I guess, but whats with the gazelle,aint it some sorta deer?" I got in the chariot and looked at it still crazed by the deer. Our lovly ares "friends" came and looked at our chariot and laughed"got a problem beef brain" i called even though ares kids werent that bad...I blamed mom for that. Also my name is not girl or she, its Melissa.
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Post by ele650 on Apr 1, 2010 18:35:01 GMT -6
"Okay Melissa, my name's Rippler, daughter of Artemis," she held her hand up so Melissa wouldn't speak. "Bring it tough guys," Rippler yelled as she grabbed the reins. "You defend with your sword," she said, still looking forward.
"Ready, set,go!" Chiron yelled.
Rippler burst her pegasus into action she looked back for a second to see the Ares kids slashing in their direction...
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Post by melissa2131 on Apr 1, 2010 18:39:47 GMT -6
Snap i cried as ares tried to lead,i used Death Defier to create the image of a large dirt pile ahead, then when they tried to slow down, i managed to pull the spear out of the kids hand. he grabbed at me, i turned invisable and stabbed his arm. It was lap one
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Post by ele650 on Apr 1, 2010 18:48:04 GMT -6
Rippler whistled loudly and Rush sped up. "Good job, only five more to go," she yelled behind her shoulder. "Oh no, good thing I brought Rush, we're going airborne!" she said as she flew up. "AHHHHHHHH," she screamed "SO AWESOME, SPEAK LOUD, I DON'T THINK I WOULD BE ABLE TO HEAR YOU ANYWAY," she yelled loudly as the wind picked up. She loved this feeling. The wind whipping through her hair, the sick feeling in her stomach, everything."LAP TWO IS IN THE SKY, BE READY, THREE OF THE ARES KIDS BROUGHT PEGASUS'S ," she screeched.
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Post by melissa2131 on Apr 2, 2010 20:02:12 GMT -6
Ok i mummbled, trying to hear over the wind. It was useless, as some of the ares kids took off, I noticed something..."ONE OF THEM IS USING MAGIC!!!" I screamed. We were thrown to the ground,i almost fell out. i managed to slash a wheel off there chariot as the ares kids swung there swords at me. it time for lap three...
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Post by ele650 on Apr 2, 2010 20:06:34 GMT -6
"Whoopie!" Rippler yelled as they landed with a BUMP. Rippler let out an ear-piercing whistle and the pegasus ran almost as fast as one of Zeus's lightning bolts. "Hold on!!!" Rippler yelled to Melissa, "Almost there!"
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Post by melissa2131 on Apr 2, 2010 20:15:34 GMT -6
i struggled with a bow and arrow, managing to shoot...a tree "this stinks, how do you deal with this darn thing?  " i pulled out Death Defier and tryed to get stab the ares driver, but there defender blocked it. i won this battle and managed to give him a good scrape, but he slashed at me. i fell into the dirt and got up. both chariots were leaving a trail of dust behind. i heard ripplers scream as our wheel got busted, it was lap 4. when rippler came around she held out her hand and i crash landed into the chariot. |
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Post by ele650 on Apr 6, 2010 17:27:48 GMT -6
"YIPPEE!" Rippler screamed as the chariot lost a wheel. "I guess were going airbourne," she said happily as she ushered the pegasus in the air. They past the finish line first, just before the Ares kid past, "WE DID IT!!!! She yelled
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Post by melissa2131 on Apr 7, 2010 17:49:57 GMT -6
Um yeah but not real dramatic.... what about:
We sped around the corner as i got to my feet. We pulled around for our last 300 yards. The Ares kids were right behind us as I tossed a spear down at them(cuz i guess we are or can be airborne) and it landed right between them. They looked up and saw us but that was all the distraction we needed as we pulled forward, taking lead and crashing to the ground as we crossed the finish line and made faces at the losers. Though... the losers werent having good sportsmanship either.I transformed Death Defier back to normal and we held the gold larels up high.....WE DID IT!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by ele650 on Apr 8, 2010 16:31:15 GMT -6
(OCC: Sorry, I was like, hurrying so I didn't have time for a good one, but I like this one even better)
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Post by melissa2131 on Apr 8, 2010 16:47:35 GMT -6
YAAYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think we should have a feast in our honor.....(hint hint)
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Post by ele650 on Apr 8, 2010 16:48:12 GMT -6
(NO, RESPOND TO MY THING)
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" i pulled out Death Defier and tryed to get stab the ares driver, but there defender blocked it. i won this battle and managed to give him a good scrape, but he slashed at me. i fell into the dirt and got up. both chariots were leaving a trail of dust behind. i heard ripplers scream as our wheel got busted, it was lap 4. when rippler came around she held out her hand and i crash landed into the chariot.